Various thoughts by Jeetan.

Friday, July 28, 2006

A vow to vow to wow

In that desperate moment
when the first tear departs from your cheek
like raindrops finally parting from a leaf
I want to be there
ready to lend you my hand.

In that contagious moment
when you can not stop yourself from
allowing the laughter that flows within
I want to be there
ready to lend you my smile.

In that sacred moment
when you must confess
because the geiser within just won't allow you to continue
I want to be there
ready to lend you my arms.

In that secret moment
when you think its time to finally
share your hopes, dreams and fears
I want to be there
ready to lend you my ears.

In all those moments
and so many more
I want to be able to cherish the time we spend
I want to be there
ready to share my soul.

4 Comments:

Blogger MR said...

And you dont think you write beautifully.

I dont see how you can unsee this...

6:27 AM, August 07, 2006

 
Blogger Jeetan said...

It sounds like a "Hallmark" card. I don't think it's good. Maybe I'm being overly critical, but I expect more from myself.

Either way, I appreciate your kind words. :)

12:54 PM, August 07, 2006

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Beautiful.
Simple, yes, maybe. but anyway beautiful.

12:01 PM, January 20, 2009

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!

11:04 PM, January 10, 2010

 

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